So now, I’m on another challenge.
Neerja gave a kick start to this wonderful challenge. This is a make your own story challenge. Follow the link Make Your Own Story to know all about the start. With utmost curiosity I was looking forward to see the challenge swinging to Tejas and from there to my dearest Sri. And there it is, its my turn to give a try.
Neerja is a wonderful writer who always keeps experimenting. I really appreciate her for starting this cool challenge which turned ON my story-teller. She gave the baton to Tejas, a person who makes wonders in this wordpress. His Jack & Jill strips are really funny. He tied a wonderful knot to the story and gave the rest to Sreechandra. Sri.. She appears like once in a blue moon. But every time she brings up something magical. She swipes off my feet always. She is a superstar who carries life in every word she writes. She encourages me in every ways & that makes me write this with my whole dedication. Thank you so much Sri for nominating me for this challenge. Now its my turn to give a leap from where Sri stopped.
Rules of the challenge:
- You have to continue from where the nominator has left.
- You have to nominate only one person in this challenge.
- You have to write the story in next 24 hours.
- You have to write 100 words only.
- Provide the link of the earlier part of the story.
- You are free to end the story.
- And yes don’t forget to thank your nominator.
- Write your views about the nominee and nominator.
Story so Far…
Once upon a time their existed a wasteland in Patliputra. There lived a little boy named Aditya who was only child of Madhavi and Shankara. They used to love him a lot and wanted him to dream big and get out of this wasted land. But Aditya unlike his parents had some another dream. He wanted to improve and convert his wasteland into a dreamland where everybody wants to live. Aditya knew he had to convince his parents for this but he didn’t how will they react and whether they will approve this idea of his dreamland.
The clock struck two past midnight as a stream of snowy moonlight sneaked through the swinging-with-the-breeze curtains and scattered on Aditya’s bed. As the squeaking sparrow went back inside the ancestral wall clock after two tweets, Aditya sneaked out of his bed quietly.
He stuffed pillows under his blanket in a shape to disguise as himself. He tiptoed out to the backyard. He double checked on both sides for no one following him before going behind the banyan tree.
As planned, Shivansh was already waiting for him there. A nod from both of them assured, everything was on track. Aditya plucked out a wrinkled paper from his pocket and Shivansh’s eyes twinkled with a beaming smile.
With quivering fingers Aditya unfolded the paper. The near-yellow paper definitely looked old.
“Here”, Aditya smiled, “is the key to our dreams….If only we can get hold of this, we shall have enough resources to convert this wasteland into the land of our dreams”.
Shivansh’s eyes shone in genuine glee. He intently looked at the unfolded paper in front of his eyes. Within seconds his eye-brows stitched into each other transforming into puzzled curiosity.
“But this looks empty Adi. This is a blank paper.”
Aditya smiled. A hint of mischief waved past his face.
“Just wait and watch the magic”, Adi whispered.
He then held up the paper and placed it against the circular moon. The moonlight diffused through the ridges and furrows of the wrinkled paper lending a surreal look. Within seconds a faint map appeared on it.
Shivansh couldn’t believe his eyes. He had many questions but Aditya’s eyes were fixed on the map.
With intense seriousness he pointed to a lotus emblem right at the middle of the map.
“And here is our destination – Padmabharan – the lotus urn”.
And the story continues…..
“What is this? Who gave you this?” Shivansh’s face revealed all his zest.
Aditya is still carrying a calm face beaming at the map. Shivansh turned blue.
“Adi, this won’t make any trouble. Right?” His voice trembled slightly.
“Calm down Shiva. Don’t be over reactive as always.” Without taking eyes off the map, still held against the moon, Aditya stepped closer to Shivansh and whispered. “We are going to make history in Pataliputra.” His voice expressed extreme determination.
Shivansh stood with his mouth half-open wondering how this piece of old paper and two fourteen-years old boys going to make history.
Aditya continued. ” This is the ultimate treasure. Once we reach here, this will give us everything we need.” He pointed Padmabharan.
“But how can we find this? This is just a map, barely a map that we have never seen before.” Shivansh started losing his patience.
“I read about this in a book owned by my Dada. I got this map from the slit on the hard bind of the book. This Padmabharan is somewhere here.” Aditya continued examining the map.
Shivansh made a step aback and checked his premise. Somewhere here? With fear and anxiety he asked. “Adi, don’t make me more confused. Will you please explain?’
Aditya nodded “Yes!”
And that’s it. My part of the story. 100 words is too less. I really need a novel out of this. And I am pretty sure that someone who can carry forward this to a brilliant piece is Bala, already a novelist. My little sister who is blessed with outstanding talent. Her writings have a lot more energy and enthusiasm. So here is your turn Bala, my lovely girl. ❤
Once again thank you Sri for nominating me. This was really amazing.
11 responses to “Make Your Own Story”
Very nicely done, Nimitha. It is interesting how the story is taking a shape, slowly but steadily.
thank You 🙂 Now m so eagerly waiting for the next part..
Yes. This is an exciting chain of posts.
This train is gaining interesting momentum 🙂 Every single person is doing extremely well with this story *thumbs up* Let’s see what Bala has in store for us. Come on, Bala!! ❤ ❤
Thank You Deepika… It was truly amazing and I found the fiction story teller in me.. really looking forward to Bala.. 🙂
You did a wonderful job, Nimz. And I’m sure Bala will induce an interesting cliff-hanger 🙂
Yes, yes, yes….the train is chugging along superfast now…..That was fab Nimz….exactly what I was imagining it to be…You have actually veered this to an adventure story…Now let’s see what twist Bala adds…..Great work Nimz!
Thank You Thank You Thank You… Happy to hear that I reached someone’s imagination… 🙂
Lets wait and see what bala have in their shack.. 🙂
Ahem – Ahem 🙂 A new story teller is born 😉 I mean everyone of you is putting so much in this story that I can’t tell how much glad I am seeing this work of yours 🙂 Great job girlie ❤ .. I never read your sister.It's time to check her out 😉 and finger crossed for next turn of the story 🙂
And yes my name spelling is Neerja 😛
Oops! I miss spelled.. :p Sowie..
Yup…the story teller is really born.. I never tried making a fiction like this before.. And yeah..This was too too interesting.. thank you for the initiative… More More experiments expecting from you!
But now..Lets wait and see where Bala gonna take us… 🙂 ❤
Yeah this is our home ground for learning 🙂 and yes excited to read the next part 🙂